ShinnyMetal Posted March 12, 2010 Share Posted March 12, 2010 Alright, I just recorded a rough (and let me tell you...it's pretty rough) I'm sick so vocally it's just meh ok (or even bleh) and I don't really have lyrics yet. soon though...soon. remix: http://tindeck.com/listen/sswy source: (mostly right now starting at 1:00) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kc-agrlU8_0&feature=related Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluelighter Posted March 16, 2010 Share Posted March 16, 2010 It's beautiful ! But I think it's difficult to recognize the original. I like the instrument you add at 1'00 for the atmosphere... very strange. It's a good beginning, I wait to see this piece more developped. Continue ! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted March 16, 2010 Share Posted March 16, 2010 wow, source tune is epically awesome. i am finding it a bit difficult to pick up on here at first (i caught on at 'take me home'), but i think it's fine as you still have plenty of source to explore. in agreement with bluelighter about the (sampled wind instrument of some sort?) 2/3 the way in, it has a great effect on the mood of the piece. vocals are hit and miss atm, but i trust that they will be improved in future versions. i really like the feel you have going with this so far, keep it up! are you planning on adding some percussion or more background? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinnyMetal Posted March 16, 2010 Author Share Posted March 16, 2010 oh yes, I just spent 5 minutes to get the general idea out to listen to. My friend is writing me lyrics. I plan on having more in way of instrumentation as well as more cource material being intigrated. Perhaps a male and female voice also? the flutes are modeled off a melotron flutes sound (like Strawberry Fields Forever or Stairway to Heaven) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
halc Posted March 16, 2010 Share Posted March 16, 2010 sounds like a great idea, can't wait to hear where you take this! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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