Not a Number: "Clockwork" [Progressive Metal]

[Not a Number]

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Name: Clockwork

Length: 7:29

Most likely the only time I'll ever use the Pitch Correction tool in Logic.

Is hopefully going to be part of an album I'm putting together, only problem is that I can only access Logic Pro at college - due to me running Windows at home. Main inspirations behind this track are Tool and Dream Theater. Still a few problems I can hear with it (a little quiet compared to the other stuff I have, even at peak volume... hihats at the start are a little too noticeable when listening through earphones..), but they're not too noticeable.

Also the time signature's a little wacky; I'm not a big fan of your standard 4/4.

Enjoy. Or endure, whichever's applicable.

[AaronD]

Very nice. I feel like your drums could be boosted a tad. Great arrangement and overall songwriting though... The string accompaniment gives it some nice atmosphere.

The count is 9/4 by the way

EDIT: I would also like to hear some more processing on the vocals. Maybe some wet reverb, HP delays, and some phasing on a few of the sustained notes would give it some serious pop methinks.