His world remix

[Simwright]

this isn't really a song i am working on, just a test of my keyboard skills. i've never played until now so it may not be that good so please tell me how i can improve. thanx

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/qjoy

[Simwright]

by accident some parts of the song don't do the modulation like they r supposed to so that kinda got screwed up.

[Emunator]

To be honest, this is kinda hard to listen to :\ When you've got the two different synths going on at once, it sounds a bit better - the timing is tighter and, while far from perfect, things go together alright. However, that portamento synth that you used a lot of the time just doesn't sound good at all. If you're looking for a similar effect that's a bit easier to be melodic with, try something that can pitch bend between notes. Also, you should work on transitioning from note to note more smoothly, the performance here seems choppy and hesitant, like you're not very confident with what you're playing. Practice will help you build up that musical flow a lot better.

I'm not trying to rail on you too hard, but honestly you've got a ways to go with your keyboarding skills. There's a few moments where it sounds good in here but it's just going to take some practice with different synths & sounds to see what you can come up with.