My first pseudo-chiptune thingie

[Fernito]

Since I'm new on this genre, I'd like to get some feedback on this tune I'm making.

http://soundcloud.com/fernito/chiptune-v4-1

Thanks in advance guys!

[Gimgak]

I like the beat at the beginning. Rocking bass lines throughout as well. This makes me feel like I'm on the final level of some modern 8-bit game. It's pretty dark sounding and intense.

Don't really know what to suggest since I'm not too experienced with chiptunes myself, but I bet you could develope this a bit more and make it longer. There are a lot of cool musical ideas you could expand on.

[Fernito]

Hey guys,

I left this project in stand by for quite a while, until I finally decided to keep working on it. I updated the link in the first post.

The track is unfinished, and I keep feeling that there's still a lot of production missing in order to it sound "pro". As this is my first chiptune-ish track, I'd appreciate any feedback that could help me make it sound better.

Thanks in advance.

[Dissidia]

Production sounds good. It could sound a bit more clear. The bass is a bit too overwhelming compared to the other sounds.

[Fernito]

Production sounds good. It could sound a bit more clear. The bass is a bit too overwhelming compared to the other sounds.

Oh, you think so? I kinda liked it as it is. I'll see what I can do.

Thanks for the feedback

[Dissidia]

This is why I have a hard time giving critique. Because I don't want to be all like "IMO" after every sentence. Can't please everyone :9

[Fernito]

This is why I have a hard time giving critique. Because I don't want to be all like "IMO" after every sentence. Can't please everyone :9

hahaha yeah, I know that feeling But don't worry, it doesn't mean I didn't appreciate your feedback.