Gimgak Posted June 5, 2010 Share Posted June 5, 2010 So I've been working a lot on my song-writing lately, but have not spent much time working on my production skills. I think I did a pretty good job on this song, but I'd like to get some feedback from some OCR peoplez, being the awesome musicians that you are. http://www.myspace.com/dillonhutyra It's the one entitled "Ash". Thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fernito Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 I'm not sure if you want comments on the lyrics or the music. If it's the first one, I can read english very good, but sadly I'm not very good at listening at it. Maybe you can post the lyrics so I can comment on them. As for the music, I liked it a lot. You've got a very innovative style here, IMO. I liked the overall composition. I'd get some better samples for the strings (both bowed and pizzicato) and maybe the drums, which are sort of the weak point of the song IMO. You've got a good voice too. Anyway, you could get some of these, to avoid those peaks with the S' and F's that can be heard some times throughout the song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gimgak Posted June 6, 2010 Author Share Posted June 6, 2010 Ya, I tried making some home-made pop shields out of nylon and a coat hanger one time, but I ended up trashing them. I'll probably invest in a new mic setup eventually, cause the mic I'm using right now is not anything special. And I agree with you that my drums are weak. Is it just the samples or my sequencing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fernito Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 I'd say that improving the samples would suffice, but a bit more complex drumline wouldn't be bad at all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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