delbuster Posted June 16, 2010 Share Posted June 16, 2010 Source tune is "Welcome to Fyrestone" link is this: Newest version, v5 http://www.tindeck.com/listen/cxnr some stuff is messy n stuff because I've worked on this for a little bit and stuff ramble ramble critique is welcome etc Borderlands! Notes: I'm liking v5 so far much more than v4. Even v3 (first one i put up) was better than v4 =o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emunator Posted June 22, 2010 Share Posted June 22, 2010 This is a solid mix dude, it's a huge improvement over anything else I've heard from you. Overall, nice meshing soundscape, the only issue I have is the drumkit doesn't necessarily fit with everything else. Use some industrial 'crashing' percussion or some woodblocks to give some character to the beat Should be submittable if you fix up the drums, though the arrangement might not fly due to conservativeness. Nonetheless, I urge others to take a listen to this, it's a good one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delbuster Posted June 22, 2010 Author Share Posted June 22, 2010 HELLO there Emu, and of course much <3s and thanks for the critique My problem is that I don't know what percussion to aim for, I've got crashes and a lot of stuff going on in there and idk how to fix drums much D: I have uploaded a new version it has another drum track that I think is cool http://www.tindeck.com/listen/wyhd v5 much better than that ^ http://www.tindeck.com/listen/cxnr Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
delbuster Posted July 2, 2010 Author Share Posted July 2, 2010 bump Is bumping allowed? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hewhoisiam Posted July 2, 2010 Share Posted July 2, 2010 bump Is bumping allowed? NO! Overall this is pretty solid. Along the lines of what Emunator. I'd say keep the cymbals you have here, and use some more African type drums. Along the lines of conga drums and such. Might mesh better. Other than that it's a fun mellow track. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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