Skies of Arcadia - B.R.A.V.E.

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It stands for Blue Rogues Against Valuan Empire. It was originally just RAVE, but I think the former has a little more personality to it.

I've been working on this for 2 days straight, and I'm to the point where my ears are so shot that I can't tell what sounds good or bad anymore so I need to take at least a full day's break from working on this. In the meantime, I figured it would be a good time to get feedback from y'all. Like I said, it could be horrible or decent. I can't tell anymore and I need to know.

The source is "Last Dungeon":

And here's my Trance (is it?) mix so far. It's only about 3 minutes, but I'd like it to be at least 4 so I'm not done. Note: If you heard the abomination that was my first Skies of Arcadia mix, just pretend that never happened.

http://soundcloud.com/exobyte/skies-of-arcadia-last-dungeon-remix-wip

And now I cross my fingers hoping it doesn't suck.

EDIT: And now I think it sucks.

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Edit: Alrighty, removed for apparent awfulness XD Will try again.