Piece of Mind - Trance

[Obtuse]

I wrote this for JH Compo 18. Its turned out to be one of my favorite Trance productions i've ever done...

Let me know what you guys think of it and where it could be improved.

[Obtuse]

I have recently done some more mixing with this track to improve it. I made the sounds sound thicker and EQed some of the sounds that were interfering with each other.

Please give me your feedback on how things sound.

[Gimgak]

Whoa, this does sound a lot fuller than the first version.

The very beginning sounds expecially tight, but as more parts come in I feel as if the bass part does not fit in as well. Everything seems to lock in again once the main chord progression begins.

The volume/ placement in the mix of the synth that enters in the first break makes the song sound a little noisy. Might want to turn it down just a little.

The lead bell-ish synth that comes in sounds kind of off, like it's playing some notes that don't fit with the chord progression.

I like the synth break down towards the end. That's a really cool riff.