mickomoo Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 I tried to write jazz awhile back and this was the result >_< I know, not really jazzy, but none the less I wanted feedback: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hemophiliac Posted February 25, 2011 Share Posted February 25, 2011 The melody is reminiscent of a few of the themes from The Incredibles. Man you gotta spice up those chords, they're mostly plain vanilla stuffs. Rhythms are pretty straight, but sometimes that's way jazz is. (i hate it when people assume that all jazz is swung or dotted rhythms). A couple interesting ideas, but could be much more colorful imo. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mickomoo Posted February 28, 2011 Author Share Posted February 28, 2011 The melody is reminiscent of a few of the themes from The Incredibles.Man you gotta spice up those chords, they're mostly plain vanilla stuffs. Rhythms are pretty straight, but sometimes that's way jazz is. (i hate it when people assume that all jazz is swung or dotted rhythms). A couple interesting ideas, but could be much more colorful imo. I do have to admit it is kinda bland. It's the second song I wrote I was being a bit conservative, though even now, after about 4-5 months of getting into this craft I don't have much else I can think to add to it lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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