Clyde's Revenge: Cherry Rain

[Mister Kerr]

Hey! This is my first work I've posted here (at least in a verrry long time) and I'd like to get some feedback. It's from a relatively obscure DOS shareware game called "Clyde's Revenge". The game itself is nothing terribly exciting, but for some reason I found the music and backgrounds fairly evocative, so I've been working on remixes for all the tracks, one by one; some better than others. This one I call "Cherry Rain":

Click here to listen to Cherry Rain!

The original MIDI, for those who want to compare, can be found

.

I've also got some other tracks from the same game that I may post later (though you can find them on this

if you want to, though I'm not asking for feedback on them now.)

[Vidilian]

The rain and other various other sound effects seem too loud compared to everything else. Balancing the volumes of everything would help a lot imo.

As a nice, easy-listening, ambient track I can't see much wrong with the arrangement since its supposed to be pretty understated so I don't have much to say about that aspect of the song. Good job though.