Starting to make a portfolio of VG musicy stuff (new song added)

[ShinnyMetal]

So to start off I'm making a dungeon or forest area kind of track. It leans more towards a forest to me but I could see how it could be used other wise. I'm wanting to know if I'm going in the write track with instrument selection and arrangement for a rpg of sorts

ForestRPG: http://tindeck.com/listen/hiru

NEW SONG! http://tindeck.com/listen/mxqs

[ShinnyMetal]

just about got it now I think

http://tindeck.com/listen/hiru

[Calum]

this is cool this is cool. I thought maybe you should change up the chords a bit but you switch things up quite a bit and it kept my interest. I'm not a huge fan of all of the sounds you're using. But that's alright really.

Keep making more originals, i look forward to seeing them.

[redtails]

That's some crazy panning. I can't say I like the drum (so much compression) but it's all right really

[Jamphibious]

I get a very "Tales of" vibe from this. Sounds like a forest from one of those games to me. This is a good thing.

That being said, I shall say a few things. The arp instrument that's used throughout (The sort of synthetic string thing) seems kind of weird to me when its playing on its own, but when the flutes and other instruments come in it seems to fit better, so I'm not so sure. It might be worth toning it down when the flute comes in also, so that the melody is clearer. I can discern the melody easily, but I feel like it should come through just a bit more.

I also like the delay on some of the drum parts, but I feel like it could be a bit more subtle.

[ShinnyMetal]

NEW SONG! http://tindeck.com/listen/irwv

[dannthr]

NEW SONG! http://tindeck.com/listen/irwv

Neat, very H Kikuta-ish!

Your production samples suffer a lot, makes your music sound cheap. If you're interested in breaking in the biz, you need to show you can go the whole 9 yards, that includes delivering top-quality production.

[ShinnyMetal]

Neat, very H Kikuta-ish!

Your production samples suffer a lot, makes your music sound cheap. If you're interested in breaking in the biz, you need to show you can go the whole 9 yards, that includes delivering top-quality production.

Thanks! and trust me..I know. but good samples = money. I plan on getting better ones in the future but this'll have to do for now. I can always do some swapping

Also, I took out the bell sound. it's much better:

http://tindeck.com/listen/mxqs