shawn2point0 Posted June 2, 2011 Share Posted June 2, 2011 Kinda basic. Didn't put too much time into it, but it's something a friend of mine wanted me to do, so I did it. Check it out guys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calum Posted June 3, 2011 Share Posted June 3, 2011 I can't decide whether i really like the harmonies or really don't... Sometimes i'm like - woah ok new harmonies they sound great - not just in thirds (please don't embarrass me and reveal they are infact just in thirds haha!) but then perhaps I'm like... didn't that really sound great? I'm a bit confused about them. I think it could be a little more beefy? As with most of the youtube comments I think there could be a bit more low end and I have REALLY bassy speakers so i don't think it's just people's speakers at home. The dubstep section, i don't know an awful lot about dubstep but that just sounded like the tune with synths - the drums didn't change into the characteristic dubstep half-time triplet type thing and there wasn't any wobble. It was all quite clean which I don't think is characteristic of dubstep. i found that section quite boring as well. I'd say stick to the metal for the whole piece and look for perhaps a more clean section where you play the chords arpeggiated and perhaps slow it down or go half time or something just to mix it up if you want. I think the chords are all good but don't sound clean enough (a bit muddy i think) i think sometimes when you played the lower strings it sounded a bit detuned... but don't quote me on that. That's just what i think, Keep it up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawn2point0 Posted June 3, 2011 Author Share Posted June 3, 2011 thanx bro for the feedback, i know myself it isnt all it can be. LIke I said I put all of a few hours into this whereas i usually take a few days. one thing though, I didn't use any chords the entire piece other than that I agree with everything you said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calum Posted June 3, 2011 Share Posted June 3, 2011 thanx bro for the feedback, i know myself it isnt all it can be. LIke I said I put all of a few hours into this whereas i usually take a few days. one thing though, I didn't use any chords the entire piece other than that I agree with everything you said oh! At 0:13 of the video i'm sure they were chords 0 were they single notes? Perhaps I just got confused. Yeah I understand how it is, keep working on it, i love the source and it's a pretty cool take. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawn2point0 Posted June 3, 2011 Author Share Posted June 3, 2011 oh! At 0:13 of the video i'm sure they were chords 0 were they single notes? Perhaps I just got confused.Yeah I understand how it is, keep working on it, i love the source and it's a pretty cool take. yea they were single notes. I could have done better on the whole thing though. shame on me:-? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anorax Posted June 23, 2011 Share Posted June 23, 2011 The dubstep section, i don't know an awful lot about dubstep but that just sounded like the tune with synths - the drums didn't change into the characteristic dubstep half-time triplet type thing and there wasn't any wobble. It was all quite clean which I don't think is characteristic of dubstep. i found that section quite boring as well. Hey! It's nice to see this on OCR! Yeah, this section isn't really dubstep... It's more like a blend of techno and trance, not really dubstep at all. If you want to, you can make two seperate songs- one metal, and the other would be teh synth part. Are you familiar with dubstep shawn? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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