Zach Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Hey all, I went digging through some old project files earlier and I stumbled upon this little gem. I made it about a year ago, initially as just a backtrack to practice soloing over, but it began to change into an actual song over time. I think the end needs work, and some low end stuff needs EQed, but other than that, I think its alright. Im open for suggestions! http://soundcloud.com/zachgreen/mosaic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eilios Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 Hey all, I went digging through some old project files earlier and I stumbled upon this little gem. I made it about a year ago, initially as just a backtrack to practice soloing over, but it began to change into an actual song over time. I think the end needs work, and some low end stuff needs EQed, but other than that, I think its alright. Im open for suggestions!http://soundcloud.com/zachgreen/mosaic The pad is weird(not bad, just weird), your kicks need boosting, there's too much left balance, your organ synth is okay sounding! The drums are repetitive, the bassline is rad, the drums are overbearing, the melody is really hard to pin down, everything is kinda muddy. The detuned synth is pretty cool! Your snare is kinda weird, and you need to work on drum programming(not making the sounds, I mean sequencing!) The arrangement is flat, and this is a bad thing. Add lots of breakdowns, and make it super tasty! Speaking of arrangements, it drags on and on duller, but never gets fuller, the pace makes me lull... er, my advice? Make it 20% cooler! (yay!) Good start, keep it up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
erineclipse Posted June 17, 2011 Share Posted June 17, 2011 liked it, panning was weird though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Posted June 17, 2011 Author Share Posted June 17, 2011 liked it, panning was weird though. Thats really the first Ive heard of that, Ill make sure to check it though. Thanks for the feedback guys! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zach Posted June 26, 2011 Author Share Posted June 26, 2011 Bumpity bump. http://soundcloud.com/zachgreen/mosaic-1 I updated it abit, changed a few things around. Still not quite finished though, may change the lead synth to a guitar or something, not sure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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