silent hill: sm - creeping distress (brainstorm mix)

[BDA]

http://tindeck.com/listen/znjh

original:

just a silly little thing i did to try to liven up a rather dreary track

suggestions welcome

[Vidilian]

For a trance song this is too short a wip at the moment for me to say much because it takes a while for this genre to build up and this cuts off before you can get it somewhere more interesting.

So for now I'd say you should just extend this and see what you can do with the arrangement with another couple minutes added on.

Other than that I'd say that the synth that comes in at the last 3rd is a little too loud compared to everything else.