Mr. Gamma Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 First of all, this is a Work-in-Progress with a capital "W"... and "P". As in, this is still very short compared to what I'm planning on making it, and it's still very raw. I just wanted to share my basic ideas, and get suggestions for when I work on finishing it. Name: Into the Forest Link: http://tindeck.com/listen/lijd Originals: Super Mario RPG Forest Maze ( ); SMW Forest of Illusion (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wkt2OM2QqkE); DKC2 Forest Interlude ( ); Saria's Song ( ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
docnano Posted October 9, 2011 Share Posted October 9, 2011 Interesting start here. I like how you interwove the SMW and SMRPG themes, and later other combinations of the themes. Stuff to work on, arrangement-wise: The part where Saria's Song first comes in comes off as a bit abrupt (a case of medley-itis, methinks). Also, I think you go a little overboard right now with the splicing of different parts of the themes together, particularly later on. Maybe it would be ok if you varied up the instrumentation and harmonies more, though. The main electric piano instrument (and others) should also be humanized with more varied articulation and dynamics. I like the ideas you have started here, keep working on it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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