Critique and Comments on 'Machine Nation'

[The Thin King]

Hello Everyone

Here's a song I just finished. I will do some additional mixing but just wanted to get some feedback. If you have a min please check it out:

http://soundcloud.com/william-anthony-adams/william-adams-machine-nation

*Also looking for animators for the music video*

Thanks!

[Sansato]

Honestly, I think that's pretty cool.