Fortified Zone - Stage 3 (Volterock Remix)

[volterock]

Hi, this was one of my favorite games as a kid and I always wanted to remix the music. It's from Fortified Zone.

I started giving it an off-beat swing to attempt a Flying Lotus & Kettel feel but I'm not sure if it's working... I think I may have listened to it too much to know if it is sounding good. Do you think it would sound better more on-beat?

Any other advice?

Source: http://soundcloud.com/volterockremix/fortified-zone-stage-3