MangaMan Sings Fairy Tail's Salamander

[MangaMan]

I was told that it was okay to post things non-video games here. I'm a vocalist that's been singing pretty much all my life, took part in a college Wisconsin All State Choir. I'm still a noob when it comes to playing an instrument so I've mostly been doing karaoke on my youtube channel as well as my anime/manga reviews as the MangaMan. Here is one of my latest songs, were I've taken an instrumental track from the Fairy Tail anime Original SoundTrack and created lyrics for it. I supply all of the vocal parts you'll hear. Still testing the water's with the volume control and getting the levels right. This not only is a testament of my lyric writing but also my singing prowess. Please tell me what you all think.

http://www.youtube.com/user/GeniusIncarnate0?feature=guide#p/c/7A807A76507C0964/12/ijHJT5yN4Ek

[Yami]

I know the original tune, so I listened in. First of all, I like your voice, you really sing quite well (but you should think about buying a better mic for recording). But I didn't really like the lyrics, I expected something more serious for this song.