TroisNyxEtienne Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 The only link I have is YouTube, and I thought I'd share, because I finished it just a few days before joining OCRemix. It's called Sur la terre des hommes libres, which is French for "In the Land of the Free". http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mhumXe-hRLo Wrote this in 2009, but this is the most recent version of this song. Please, do tell me what you think! P.S. I'm aware that I didn't hold my breath in places, and I should've done so. I'm also aware that the vocals might sound a bit muddy, but I can't do anything about this yet: I've only got an integrated PC mic to use, and I'm a penniless student! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TroisNyxEtienne Posted March 3, 2012 Author Share Posted March 3, 2012 .......is anyone even going to take a look? :'( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeViper Posted March 3, 2012 Share Posted March 3, 2012 I liked it. Other than the muddy vocals, I think it was pretty good. I have to admit though, in my opinion, it does get a little repetitive after 4:02. Maybe you could raising the chorus up a key or something at that point? Maybe just to give it some variance. Or maybe even add a violin or something soloing under the chorus? I'm just putting out some ideas. Overall though I liked it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TroisNyxEtienne Posted March 3, 2012 Author Share Posted March 3, 2012 Yeah, that's an idea. Thank you! Also, thanks for listening. I imagine I'll have to remake this at some point, with a better mic, and if I do, I'll gladly throw it in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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