Skies of Arcadia - Birth of Rhaknam

[Modus]

I'm trying to make this work for the SoA Remix project as a Town of Ice remix. Where it cuts off, I want to take the sequences from 0:45 in the

and play through those next. Seems like the obvious thing I was building up to.

Thanks for any tips.

Track: Birth of Rhaknam WIP

Source:

[Darangen]

It's still pretty close to the source as is, without really changing the sound-scape all that much. It's obviously still in progress though.

Just make sure that you breathe some new life into the track, make it your own somehow.

[Modus]

OK well it probably sounds more lifeless than it should because I haven't found a real guitarist for it yet. That's a sequenced guitar in there now. I also wanted it to be like the original in that it's themed background music, not melody-driven or anything.

Regardless, I think the problem is my arrangement's boring. I'm re-arranging it pretty drastically to make it develop more quickly and have a better soundscape.