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Definitely the only things that I found to be truly jarring were the sweeps at the beginning and at 2:30. They're just really excessive.

The entire introductory sequence until 0:27 should be reworked; it's a tad jumpy and it doesn't transition well into the next part.

At 1:30 a wood hit comes in on the right. Maybe you could add a chorus affect to that, or layer it, because it sounds weak and empty--especially when it gets drowned out by the following section(s). Since this is orchestral, I think it would be more fitting if it sounded like a bunch of people hitting the wood, a la traditional Japanese percussive music.

Lastly, I thought you could have extended the sections at 6:27 a bit more--it comes in and out too quickly.

Excellent work overall though! Everything that I didn't mention seems to be perfect :)

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