Journey to Silius - Level 1

[Mahrellon]

Hi (again),

I have a friend who used to love Journey to Silius when she was a kid. Recently she was diagnosed with annorexia so I decided to remix the level 1 song in her honor.

[Defiant00]

Seems like a good start to me, but there are a few things that I think could be improved.

First, your leads seem way too quiet. They can be heard over the rest of the mix, but only just.

Second is just a general comment about repetition, this one feels like it could benefit from you switching it up a bit, either on the arrangement or instrumentation side (or perhaps both).

And third is a recommendation to not do a fade-out ending