VideoGameManiac Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 (edited) So this is one of my first tries on rpg music, would like to know what I could improve on this ty! https://soundcloud.com/videogamemaniac/peaceful-garden Edited April 15, 2013 by VideoGameManiac Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kc1336 Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 Definitely got a nice peaceful vibe to this, the description on SC is a great way to put the listener directly in the place you are when you compose this, great work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necrox Posted April 15, 2013 Share Posted April 15, 2013 Nice job getting the intended vibe. The piece began to feel a bit stagnant after a while, but the piano helped with keeping it atmospheric. I would reccomend maybe changing the melodies up a bit, as the song can get ho-hum at times. Overall, good job! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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