Inspirational beat

[Tragic Hero]

[Mark Stothard]

I really like what you have got here and it has huge potential.

One thing I would suggest is to work on the mix a little as everything sounds like it is coming straight down the middle and at the same volume. A little panning can help with this, and choose an instrument you want to stand out and work around that.

Best

Mark.

[Haha_YouAint]

It sounds really cool. I think the mix is the only thing though. I'd lower the frequency on the shaker and pan it.