Benjaipod Posted June 10, 2013 Posted June 10, 2013 (edited) Hi everyone... i'm new arround here... I made some kind of a ska, rockerish, pop version of this song... hope you like it and check my others uploads in my soundcloud... https://soundcloud.com/benjaipod/kirbys-dream-land-gourmet-race Follow and share! Edited June 10, 2013 by Benjaipod Quote
Benjaipod Posted June 19, 2013 Author Posted June 19, 2013 i was hoping to get some comments on this one xD Quote
Ivan Hakštok Posted June 20, 2013 Posted June 20, 2013 Funny, I thought I left a comment on this, maybe I forgot to hit the "submit reply" button xD The lead guitar sounds like it has too much reverb compared to the other instruments, so try lowering it down a bit. The drums could be louder and the drum writing could be better. You need to add more transitions, right now the song feels pretty much on autopilot. Also, the song feels kinda empty but I can't really suggest what to add to fill the space. You need something more than just pad chords in the background. Quote
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