Darkwood Manor (BGM)

[derpmax]

Wrote some more background music (for a non-existent video game) today, I'm quite happy with it but would love some feedback on it

https://soundcloud.com/maxwmusic/darkwoods-manor

[Bejack]

Very good. I think your music captures the feeling pretty accurately about a "Darkwoods Manor". The piano chords when used as background to the strings works nicely but when the piano becomes the main focus at 1:10 - 1:30 and again at 2:42 - 3:02 feels a little off because all the notes are playing at the same volume. Playing with the velocity a little in these parts might make an interesting difference.

Also have you tried using other instruments like tremolo strings to give it more of an eerie feeling and maybe some horns/brass to give it a little more power, but not everywhere just little tidbits here and there. I really like that flute section.