Throwing Eggs (Yoshi's Island Remix)

[doppelbros.]

And another one for you.

http://soundcloud.com/doppelbros/throwing-eggs-yoshis-island

[Skrypnyk]

2:11 in and, while the sounds you have aren't all that bad, there isn't a whole lot going on writing wise, and you've looped the same stuff with very little variation, this tends to get really boring really quickly.

The subtle add at 2:31 and change up at 2:53 are neat, but again you just keep reusing the same sound over and over and over and over it gets really dull really quickly. You need to have more fun with the writing. Drop sounds (4:18 was well done), add more instruments, add more variation, cut 2-2 1/2minutes of the looped stuff, it's unnecessary. Play around with effects, get other synth sounds going, add some sizzle and some spice.