Pokemon Sapphire: Sapphire Rain [Heavy Rain Remix]

[Lime Trees]

I plan to submit this but first I wanted to drop this here for people to hear. Opinions, comments and suggestions are welcomed and greatly appreciated!

https://soundcloud.com/lime-trees/sapphire-rain

Edited March 1, 2015 by Lime Trees

[timaeus222]

This has a very cool atmosphere, and could have worked as a sample library demo track in terms of the cohesive atmosphere it gives. However, the hi hats sound completely quantized, with all the notes at the same velocities, so it sounds too mechanical. Also, the arrangement is quite close to the original's notes, feels looped, and the dynamics don't really go anywhere. While this sounds nice on its own, currently it has major issues in its lack of personalization, humanization, and dynamics.

Edited March 2, 2015 by timaeus222