Corridor 7 (DOS) - Untitled Remix

[leiget]

Remix of a couple of songs from the DOS game Corridor 7.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Corridor_7:_Alien_Invasion

 

UPDATE 01 (LATEST): https://clyp.it/cdwzfhnd

FIRST DRAFT: https://clyp.it/dzusrzlz

 

SOURCES:
heavy2.mid = https://youtu.be/iHDvnqX8MS4
l1_var.mid = https://youtu.be/Qr4fLrfW2oA

level3.mid =

 

NOTES:

I'm just using a Megadrive/Genesis soundfont to write it. I'll make the full production after I get done writing the song.

[leiget]

Here's an update. Any comments are appreciated.

 

https://clyp.it/cdwzfhnd

 

Another song is being used in this mix as well:

level3.mid = https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DRNBVDWdRRw

[Eino Keskitalo]

I've got to admit I like the Mega Drive sound..

 

This has a happy energetic vibe for certain. It's quite fun.

 

There's some repetitiveness at this point. The structure seems to start with (intro)+ABCABC and the second ABC feels like a close repeat of the first ones. Maybe you could vary the bassline more in the second ABC - it keeps the same(ish) throughout. It feels like the intro goes on a touch long, you could cut to the B part at 0:30 - you've been playing the A part riff since 0:08 in the intro so it kind of counts as A part repetition (if you get what I mean), and 0:30-0:37 didn't seem to have anything new.

 

In the C part, the melody seems to have a note clashing with the harmony at 0:52 (and subsequently).

 

My daughter (4yo) commented that this is a nice song.