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Yikes. The change you made from the original at 0:25 was not an improvement. I don't know what else to say - it's just not. And you repeated and accented it! It might fit better if you altered the chord progression leading up to it though.

 

I think the ending should be a bit grander, or at the very least not just stop suddenly.

 

Aside from that, I really like this. Very good orchestration.

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God I don't know how i let this pass, will definitively change that 0:25 part (and the other ones). 

Will definitively change the ending too!

 

Thank you for your advices!

 

EDIT: yup, it sounds awful, wtf was I thinking? x)

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