remix ''Half time'' captain tsubasa 2

[kraydful]

hello OCR, this is my first remix ever, I started producing like 2 or 3 weeks ago so I'm a complete noob but hungry for wisdom, I hope you enjoy this piece, is still a wip because I want to find a singer or rapper but this is the overall song, thank you.

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/654601

[kraydful]

bump...a critic would be really appreciated.

[Nostalvania]

Sounds pretty good for a first remix, production sounds good too i think.

 

Yeah, it is pretty repetitive and i think adding some rapping/lyrics would probably make it more interesting. Maybe you can find a rapper here on OCR?

 

The synth strings sound nice but i feel at 2:24 they are a bit too slow for the faster chord changes, it sounds like they are always a bit behind the beat.

 

The piano at 3:23 sounds a bit too mechanical for my tastes, like all notes have the same velocity. My preferred method is always to play in the piano parts live, you can still edit/quantize it afterwards. But of course you can also change the velocities and note lenghts manually in the piano roll of your DAW.

 

Hope this was a little bit useful and take my feedback with a grain of salt since electronic music is not really my speciality

[kraydful]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback.