kraydful Posted November 19, 2015 Share Posted November 19, 2015 hello OCR, this is my first remix ever, I started producing like 2 or 3 weeks ago so I'm a complete noob but hungry for wisdom, I hope you enjoy this piece, is still a wip because I want to find a singer or rapper but this is the overall song, thank you.http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/654601 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kraydful Posted November 30, 2015 Author Share Posted November 30, 2015 bump...a critic would be really appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nostalvania Posted December 4, 2015 Share Posted December 4, 2015 Sounds pretty good for a first remix, production sounds good too i think. Yeah, it is pretty repetitive and i think adding some rapping/lyrics would probably make it more interesting. Maybe you can find a rapper here on OCR? The synth strings sound nice but i feel at 2:24 they are a bit too slow for the faster chord changes, it sounds like they are always a bit behind the beat. The piano at 3:23 sounds a bit too mechanical for my tastes, like all notes have the same velocity. My preferred method is always to play in the piano parts live, you can still edit/quantize it afterwards. But of course you can also change the velocities and note lenghts manually in the piano roll of your DAW. Hope this was a little bit useful and take my feedback with a grain of salt since electronic music is not really my speciality kraydful 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kraydful Posted December 6, 2015 Author Share Posted December 6, 2015 Thank you very much, I really appreciate you taking the time to give me feedback. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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