Spacey Pirate Orchestra

[Toilet Goat]

A couple of songs in progress...

first is a pirateish orchestral tension with some guitar thingy:

secondly a journey to space or similiar kind  

and then a 'sad' piano song 

 

[CGrail]

I really like the composition here. The pirate one really sounds the part, with all the right intrumentation to my ears. One thing I'd suggest is try to loosen up some of the parts. For example the strings providing a staccato rhythm sound a bit rigid and robotic, a little bit of changing up velocity and timing on your Midi can go a long way.

The space one is cool, the transition into the more driving part was nice. Somewhat unrelated but I thought it was a funny coincidence that I was literally about to make a thread about my new track "Journey to the Groovy Depths of Space" before I read this. 

The third one was cool, I really liked once the strings come in. Fills the space well

[Toilet Goat]

Thanks mate for listening and analysis! Yes, revamping is needed on that pirate thingie  got some work to do