Toilet Goat Posted September 30, 2016 Share Posted September 30, 2016 A couple of songs in progress... first is a pirateish orchestral tension with some guitar thingy: secondly a journey to space or similiar kind and then a 'sad' piano song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CGrail Posted September 30, 2016 Share Posted September 30, 2016 I really like the composition here. The pirate one really sounds the part, with all the right intrumentation to my ears. One thing I'd suggest is try to loosen up some of the parts. For example the strings providing a staccato rhythm sound a bit rigid and robotic, a little bit of changing up velocity and timing on your Midi can go a long way. The space one is cool, the transition into the more driving part was nice. Somewhat unrelated but I thought it was a funny coincidence that I was literally about to make a thread about my new track "Journey to the Groovy Depths of Space" before I read this. The third one was cool, I really liked once the strings come in. Fills the space well Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toilet Goat Posted September 30, 2016 Author Share Posted September 30, 2016 Thanks mate for listening and analysis! Yes, revamping is needed on that pirate thingie got some work to do Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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