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LoZ's Song of Storms + A&B's Sun and Moon


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Wow, just gave this a listen and I'm surprised no one has commented on this. 

I'm quite impressed with the vocals for this track; very bright and bold, the harmonies are good and work well with the soundscape, and the lyrics are laid out well and seem quite appropriate. The electronic parts could do with better mixing. Some of the brighter sounds are distracting (mostly the end of the 'chorus') and there are lots of places where some of the more subtle parts are being drowned out by this. I also think there could be a bridge put into this somewhere to break up that main progression a bit. I mean, you have lots of variation throughout the song, but on the same parts over and over again. Just a suggestion here.

Great work! I hope to hear more of your stuff on here.

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