Super Mario Bros. Underground remix

[IsThatNapoleon]

I'm new at trying to remix video game music I've been a lurker for a long while.  being a novice i would love some pointers and guidance from the community.

here is the posting of what I've done so far.

 

[timaeus222]

I like that it was changed to 6/4 instead of 4/4. I do think however that this is a pretty simple arrangement. The notes are followed from the original pretty closely, and there are really only two or three textures: the drums, a bass, and a lead. Usually, a full-enough soundscape also involves a chordal instrument. Also, the arrangement is fairly repetitive. Six notes are repeated many times after the first 12 seconds.

This is a tough source to remix, as it basically asks you to incorporate your own original motifs to break apart the repetition. Here's an example of a remix of this track:

See if you can focus on the notes that are not the Underground BGM and see how they interact with the source.

[IsThatNapoleon]

i see what your saying ill keep at it thanks for the input.