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So I've been working on some college audition materials for composition majors, and I've been having some problems. Basically, this is the theme for the supreme "general" of some unknown enemy force.

It's really big and heavy; the up/down beats are supposed to be his "footsteps." There's a short break in the middle where we see the last resistance against this general, then he's back. In the end, he crushes the resistance himself, but I haven't finished that part yet.

In a nutshell, I need advice. What does the piece need? I suck at mastering, so it doesn't sound very "professional" yet, but what are some composition things I could add? (Other than an ending... >_>)

Thanks for any tips you can give...

Link: http://www.escariot.net/ProtoR/generalstheme.mp3

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