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Kirby - DreamLand (tranced!) WIP!!


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So while I was bored I came up with this. I really like the bassline... but yeah, this is still a very rough early WIP, and but it's refreshing to be doing remixes again, as I felt like in the last couple days, or so I'd been in a musical drough, unable to make anything at all. Whee :) anyway, its still a rough wip... but yeah.

http://strike911.sanctuslegacy.com/strike911_dreamland.mp3

Whattaya think?

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Sounds pretty good so far, of course you should lengthen it and develop it further, but I like the sound ur going for. My biggest criticism is 2/3 of the way through, you bring in some low-frequency sound that really makes the soundscape convoluted in my opinion......overall though this has nice potential man : )

Oh yeah, could you post a link to the original song?

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Some of the notes and syncopation sounds a little awkward to me. And yes, the mix is very muddy sounding 2/3 of the way through especially. It's the lower frequencied thing going on in the background; either take it out entirely, change the instrument, or filter it so the frequencies don't overlap so much with your lead and gated synth.

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