Night of The Halo by LxK

[Legion Kreinak]

Yeah, so, still learning basics of making music. No laughter allowed. Tell me if this is acceptable, what needs work, anything I'm doing wrong/right.

http://www.box.net/shared/e57odu9omj

Another random song I was trying to throw together:

http://www.box.net/shared/kfhgg1ay6x

[Legion Kreinak]

Mmm, that bad, eh?

Any feedback would be nice, for anyone who bothered to listen. I know I'm new, but come on.