Epic_Resistance (Production issues?)

[Bigmowthp]

I really liked Audix's idea of a theme song for the basketball team

similarly, I went ahead to try to write something for the varsity wrestling team (which I am a part of) at my high school. This would be for pep rallys when the team walks out before talking. I tried to do this is a similar fashion to Audix's piece.

However, I am not very learned in production aspects. Is there anything majorly wrong in terms of distortion, cluttering, etc.?

http://musichostr.com/music/27