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RE: reviled.mp3, your thread seemed kind of old so decided to PM you instead. You seem pretty competent as a pianist. The pauses are a bit too long like you're trying to decide what you're going to play next. I don't really hear a melody until about halfway through the song. I like some of the chord choices and harmonies you use. Your ideas seem pretty fragmented and don't transition together that well. I could probably offer better advice if I knew your musical background a bit better. I really like these melodies, but wish they would keep going and be developed a bit more. I want to hear some real emotion fleshed out. Just go ahead and express whatever you're feeling through that damned keyboard. That's what I tend to do.