Thanks for the comments.
Thats a bit vague, could you suggest instruments that would work in the mix?
I agree it sounds quite sparse... I'm not sure why. You hear songs with just as many lines and they don't sound sparce... so I think this is a production problem. The start is deliberatly sparce obviously, but even when the beat comes in, there is no "thickness" to it, I wonder if compression might help? I'll have to try. Yeah I normally leave that sort of "polishing" to the end to make it sound more human. Good suggestion, will implament that one. The click is deliberate, to give it more of a percussive "punch", but I will try anyway. Interesting idea... but I don't want to make it too quirky in that sense as it's not normally the type of sound I go for, though I have heard plenty of remixes that use that effect (I think Analoq uses that one a fair bit). Any suggestions for soundfonts or samplepacks I could use for this?