Thank you all very much on the feed back.
I will try eslware here in a couple min.
I will try to blend those a tad bit more thank you for pointing that out.
Well, I am trying my best to figure out ways for this song to trail up to the end, the only problem is that i barley have any knowledge in music. All i do for music on a daily basis is go to High School and play a Trumpet. So, Pretty much I'm not even sure how to right music. Half of it was moving notes up and down trying to figure out what sounds good.
As to the Paning, Velocities, and what ever ADSR stands for. I didn't want to do much on Paning because i wanted it to basically use both speakers (just in case), but as i just now realized, Other people can automatically set there speakers to mono, so, I have no reason to not Pan. I will work on that a bit as well.
The Velocities are bascically only on Percussion right now i didn't experiment with the others tho. Its only the Vibes, hi-hat, drums, and the like.
Also on the Percussion (except the vibes), I tried to make different sets of loops and or rhythms for the beginning parts but all i came up with was the part you already hear. I'll try to make it change more.