Yeah, i'm a bit inexperienced for arranging music, hopefully working with you guys will help me improve my works. I know the judges will most likely reject it, that's fine with me, I'm looking for critic. Can you clarify what you mean by "empty" and "humanization"? I've never really heard that terminology being used at the sites i frequent, so anything you can help me out with would be greatly appreciated. Hopefully reworking the song from the ground with your help will help me improve my pieces. :3