Thanks alot for all the critique and suggestions, really helpful!
I completely agree with your points, I should add more variation to the song, make it more alive etc.
Already working on adding a few of your suggestions to it.
I must admit I had a hard time trying to get some powerfull hits at the 1:00 section, you have some good suggestions there so I will definitely try to make it more powerfull.
Another problem as you mention, is the transition at 1:36 and I do often have a problem making transitions like that. When you say offset it, how do you mean then? Would a tempo shift, making it slightly slower perhaps help?
Once again, thanks for the suggestions, much appreciated!