Cosmic Games

Thanks for the help guys! I never realized even OCR'ers were such good critics. I'll fix it up big time, since now I see the things you two pointed out that needs fixing. I'll post the new version later today hopefully, and postpone the second one. Hope you guys check back later, thanks again for the help! Edit: It's much better already, I'm looking forward to posting the new version when it's done. Heres a newer but not complete version: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/huhw/Superlemmingsdancemixfix5 To compare with the first, you can click here for the older one: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/125639

Hey everyone, I'm new here to OC, (I just signed up an account being intrested in submitting remixes to OC in the future). I'm quite new to fruity loops 7 (as I have only been using it for about two weeks, or so, and I'm still trying to figure everything out) but I do have experience composing and mixing. Heres my latest song, which is a Lemmings one: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/125639 Could anyone tell me if this would be worthy enough of submission? I plan to fix it up a little first though, maybe. Also, I'm working on a second Lemmings remix right now, so I'll be posting it later today (hopefully). Thanks!