i love it a lot!
it's not the "toxic-avenger-style dance track" i was looking for but it's a really really great tune. i especially like the part after the "sonic i getting out of air", i love the loud long-warped sound, i really like the faster peaced beat(?) and in my opionon the could be even more freaking out in that part.
maybe the alarm could also get some more freaking out bevor the "out of air melody comes"
anyway, i enjoy your song how it is in the moment already really much (im hearing it since more than a hour XD)
you did a great job, love the sounds, there is still things you could "improve" like an higher pace in generell and more freaking out the whole time. but thats just my opinion is see how some ppl would like to see your tweaks in the other directionXD
upload it somewhere at myspace XD