Ogre Nix

I'm using Reason 4. When you say intro do you mean the first 28 seconds or up until about 1:00?

Remix Link: http://www.sendspace.com/file/6fhdlz Sources: Devil Kazuya: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PRG5hkIhclw Emotionless Passion: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8mt-Tuvdcb4 Guilty or Not: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TLIjhWC-bCg I submitted this in July, but it was rejected for these reasons: the arrangement is too texturally sparse, too underdeveloped and/or too repetitive the sound quality (e.g. sample quality, sequencing, mixing, processing, recording) is poor I'm a newbie when it comes to mixing so I could really use help with that. I can't afford any new equipment so please help me make the best out of what I have.

Thanks for replying! I know the bass sounds fake. But I thought the other guitars sounded good enough. So much for Guitar Pro's "Real Sound" Engine. Ha ha. Anyway, I am going to put some more work on this and try to get some better sounding instruments.

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/dptq http://ocrwip.fireslash.net/?fid=672 No more midi! I'm happy with how this turned out for the most part. Please leave any constructive criticism/comments.

Music source: Remix link: http://ocrwip.fireslash.net/?fid=512 I've been working on this remix for a while now. I would like get some feedback on the arrangement. Right now the instruments are all midi, but that will change in the future.