Thank you. I have been trying to work on a lead in. And after the first few times I listened to it, I think I know what you mean. It would tend to get annoying. this is exactly what I wanted by the way. Very constructive and you gave me pointers. I came here first because I think my wife is just too nice for her own good when it comes to me and too biased. I wanted some one to pick it apart for what it is and give me exactly what you gave me, not just tell me its very good and that they like it. Thank you I'm going to work on reworking it today. hopefully I will get closer to what I'm looking for. I never expected my first try to be great. And as you said don't give up, and I don't plan too.