Zephyrnereus

does anyone have an opinion? or is it that I'm missing information? I really wasn't sure what I was aiming for with this song in the beginning. at first it started with "make it sound 8-bit" but I slowly moved away from the idea. soon, I started thinking that I wanted to find a techno-y side to the song. I wanted to describe a fortress filled with advanced circuits, with rain just outside its walls with the music. I feel that I have achieved that, but I still get the feeling that it might be missing something.

ok, so this song has been sitting in my laptop for quite some time, but just recently I managed to finish it to my liking. I'd like some opinions on it before thinking about submitting it though. Fortress in the Rain: http://www.box.net/shared/1pqja4tiaz Source: Metroid Prime 2 Echoes - Sanctuary Fortress

Helo, this is my first time posting here on the OC forums. I've always wanted to make remixes, but never got the courage and programs to make some until now. although the following song is not my first remix, it is the one that I'm taking more seriously, the others just being practice to learn how it works. it's still untitled, as this is only the instrumental. I'm waiting for help from others with the lyrics. so without further ado, I give you my remix. it was made with Mixcraft 5. I'd love to hear opinions of those with more experience. once I got the lyrics written and recorded, I'll add them to the song. (oh, and I have a noob question... is there a way to change the thread order so that the first post into the thread is the top one? for some reason it's configured to be newest posts on top and it's hard for me to read it right.)