Alright then, here's the scoop.
I took your suggestions and worked a good bit more on the song. I worked on changing some of the sounds and reworked the bassline a good bit. I spent the majority of time working on the mix and fixing how it sounded. I know that rozovian said there was a lot of bass, and it was actually intentional so I kept a good strong bass sound in, but toned it back a wee bit. Also I pushed the high end on my lead sound so it filled the upper register, and added a little bit of modulation so that long notes didn't sound so stale. I'm pretty happy with it, but if you hear anything wrong with the new version, let me know. I'll leave it as a wip, but I would say it's close to finished. I'm going to be working on another project for a while on top of another remix, this time for traverse town from Kingdom Hearts. (One of my favorites )
Any way, here it is.